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Reviewer: Wafflehaus Signed
Date: 07/21/2010 - 09:04PM
Title: Five Years Later
I hope that you will finish the fiction; I have faith that the sequel will be as thrilling as the first.
Reviewer: aardvark Signed
Date: 05/05/2007 - 02:10PM
Title: Five Years Later
I like the snappy dialogue within this story and the way you keep the story's momentum high. I enjoyed the interaction of the three Turks and your persuasive desription of their actions, keeping each character's traits recognisable. I admit that when I first glanced through this story I thought the plot would be a little proverbial and it would be good for you to expand on the word 'said'. It's a good atempt at a fic. I give it 6/10 so far.
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